Challenge 12: An Essay
Tuesday, September 14, 2010
The essay can't be just stating names in complete sentences. You must give details on each subtopic, and you have to make sense. You can't say "I want so and so out because they haven't been to a challenge in a week." and just end it there. You also have to have better details than that, because you are pretty much trying to convince me this week that you can write and you have good ideas on who should stay in, or should be eliminated...
Elimination will be on chat this week. I will review all the comments on Friday, and then pick a winner. I will take final statements from the contestants, and then I will say the best two essays, and those two people will be safe. The worst essay will be the losing contestant. Simple as that.
This challenge takes place Saturday, September 18, 2010
On Chat (xat.com/cpskool)
Starts at 1:20 PST
-Penguin874
Host of CPSkool Kamp
10 comments:
*The first paragraph about I can't do this IS part of the essay.Thanks,Musa :) *
Oh no...I can't do this.Really...I
can't.All the remaining contestants are like my best friends and you can't eliminate a best friend.The choice was so impossible,and I'm scared to hurt peoples feelings.I'm so sorry the the person I have decided to eliminate...you know I'm only doing it because I have to :)
That person is Stickie.I'm sorry,this is why.
After looking through ALL the challenge posts,Stickie has missed two challenges(Although that is not the main reason)When Stickie came, he took charge and then...the rest of the Hornets didn't get a say in what they wanted to do,and (no offence) but Stickie's plans don't always work.I couldn't help but notice,but when I looked through the posts,most of the times Hornets won was when Stickie was here.That got me thinking.Did it mean that was why we was losing? If it is,that is obviously not the WHOLE reason why we used to lose alot.
Also,I realised something.If Stickie does go on any further, if there's anymore challenges like the circus igloo,Stickie can't take part because he is the only non member in the competition.
That is the 3 reasons why i think Stickie should be out.Sorry buddy :(
OOPS THIS IS A BIT LONG xD Oh well.
From Musa.
when is it? plz tell me!!!! XD! I must c a CPskool challenge!
First off, I'd like to thank EVERYONE for keeping me in, and letting me get this far. If I get out, I'll still for sure be poud of myself, and happy that I got this far.
CPSkool is an amazing place - you meet so many great new friends, who almost seem like family. The chat almost seems like home. I'm not going to say EVERYONE, but basically 99% of the people you meet because of CPSkool are just amazing people. They're always so nice, kind, funny, and helpful, too. We're now in the top 6 - I truly believe that everyone who has made it this far DESERVES to be here. Every week, I've read the elimination post, and though, "Yeah, that's fair". But now, it's hard to eliminate people. Last week, I pulled off my best act, and ended up being for the first time EVER, the challenge winner. I was safe, which made me happy, but sad at the same time. I knew someone great would have to get the boot. I don't yet know how that feels, but I have a feeling it feels pretty sad... and I do NOT want to find out any time soon. ;-)
As the weeks go on, I am finding it harder and harder to eliminate someone. I really think we all have about an equal chance of winning, but I do think one person stands out - that person is Chilly98656. I think she stands out because she has won a LOT of challenges, more than any of us I think. She helped out the Fireflies a lot when we were on teams, therefore, I'm saying I don't think she should be eliminated any time soon.
Another person I don't think should be eliminated is Musawinx1. She has shown up to almost every challenge, and is a really nice person!
My pick to be eliminated will probably have to be Sebastain7 or Pikachu2rock. I think Sebastain7 might be a good choice to be eliminated because he hasn't shown up much lately, and even the week of the circuses, he had no idea what was going on and just ignored the challenge. By the top 6, everyone should be comitted and should show up to all challenges unless they have a good excuse. If not, I think Pikachu2rock should get kicked out because she hasn't shown up much, I don't think, but I haven't really gotten to know her yet since I'm recently knew to the CPSkool community.
Me... me me me... do I think I could win? Well, like I said before, I think we've all got pretty equal chances of winning. I don't really know if I will be able to pull it off, but I will try my hardest and hopefully the work will pay off!
I'm basically saying that CPSkool has been amazing so far, and I want it to stay amazing until the end. :)
There's my essay! I hope you like it!
-Slidoo
Oh by the way, Seb quit CP and Cpskool :P
Well, to be honest, I really like everyone who is in the final 6 right now. I don't want to eliminate anyone but I think...Slidoo...? If you don't count my vote that is completely fine with me. Lol, I don't know who to vote off. X3 But, who I think should be safe is Musa...or Chilly...or Seb...or...anyone XD...Musa is the most I want to be safe. She's been the nicest to me and has shown up to so many challenges. :) So has everyone else...that's why it's so hard!! X3 I think I should win CPSkool because I'm a hard worker that tries her best at everything. :) I try to be a nice friend and do my best at CPSkool. I have enjoyed the game and the people soooo much...I've had a fun time. :) So, if I don't win, I'll still be so,so happy I made it to this point...So...That's all I guess...Well, cya! :)
Artist
Well, I think I Chilly, Slidoo, and Musa should be the safe ones. Because Artist HAS NOT come on In quite a while that I know of, and I don't think she puts that much effort into the challenges while Chilly, Slidoo, and Musa do I mean they've been to almost ALL the challenges and artist has missed quite a few more that the others. I think I should win Cpskool Kamp because I'm trustworthy and I don't cheat, I'm always on time, and I'm great at challenges.
~Stickie408
Haii..here's my essay (:
Part 1: http://i284.photobucket.com/albums/ll37/kitkat564_2008/Partoneofmyessay.png
Part 2: http://i284.photobucket.com/albums/ll37/kitkat564_2008/Parttwoofmyessay.png
I love to write/type, so sorry if it's long lol.
-Chilly
hey wheres my essay? (Shifty)
Btw, srry I didn't just type it here.. I didn't know xD
Why eliminate someone when Sebastian7 Quit CP and CPSkool
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